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Der Gro▀mann,

Oh, should I travel through the woods
Or should I not wishing I would
For above me lurks within the trees
No one could hear my deathly screams

The palest man, the blackest suit
Bigger than the tallest brute
Six black arms will grab you up
Or stalk you till you just give up

A top hat bares upon his head
Makes your soul fill up with dread
He takes you when you least expect
Boil you up, and eat your neck

He'll leave your body not to eat
But staple your corpse on a tree
Fear the man, the slender man
For he can do, what no man can

By ~ Rawtin Amirand
it is complete, yes i got the pages by myself, yes i was scared and nearly peed myself o_o and thank you for reading =)

AND another thing, you people stop telling me wiether the name of it is wrong or not, yes it is German but in the ORIGINAL poem, the "o" didnt have to two dots over it ok!!!! :pissed: so stfu about the title or i'll remove the comment option.

thank you and have a pleasent day :heart:

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ShaneDSE2 Featured By Owner May 1, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Did you actually beat that game? its so difficult!!!
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LonelyVioletLacey Featured By Owner May 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
yah X3 nearly pissed myself
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littlemisslockheart Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015
Very well done! Your poem had an excellent rythem and flow to it and had great imagery! :D 👍
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:iconlonelyvioletlacey:
LonelyVioletLacey Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you x3 but that came from the game itself, I didn't make it, I just put all the pages together
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scythos97 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Clem Epic face YES GOTTA LOVE SIR SLENDY
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ShinigamiEyes22 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014
Amazing poem. I recently heard of the Slender Man and started to collect some information about him, when I stumbled on to Der Großmann, which led me to your account. I love it due to my connection to Germany. Though I am only German decent, I feel at peace when listening to the language.
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LonelyVioletLacey Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks, and that's cool :3
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ShinigamiEyes22 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014
You're welcome.
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DarkestHour66 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
that ..... was ...... BEAUTIFUL !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Spazattackplz Crying rabbit Toilet Paper Are You Happy :happy: 
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LanestraFlameheart Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Wonderful images here well done.
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LonelyVioletLacey Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :) 
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LanestraFlameheart Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Your welcome
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spartanwhisenhimer Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013
11 drunk guys and pewdiepie along with a lot others make this game awesome ^_^
But I suck at the game seeing how I only got 8 of those 16 pages
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SophiAlpha Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
Dude, that's like getting four out of eight pages! I get one, turn around, and I'm dead!
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spartanwhisenhimer Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
i try to beat the game to get the 20 dollar mode, and slender really is unfair
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LonelyVioletLacey Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol, you did better than I did on my first try. I got like... 5 or 6
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spartanwhisenhimer Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013
trust me, i had to scream and mash a lot of buttons to get that far, damn near broke my keyboard 
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LonelyVioletLacey Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
dang man :lmao: I'm glad i'm the calm kind of gamer or else I'd probably have to buy a new key board or an xbox controller already too 
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spartanwhisenhimer Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013
hehehe ^_^ thank the maker that my keyboard is durable 
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LonelyVioletLacey Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:lmao: yes
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crapsound Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013
Thank you for this I now know what's written in those notes/pages.
The guy in the video I watched doesn't bother reading them and I'm a bit lazy on watching every single video and try to see if the one playing in the video do in fact read every note/page he/she finds.

So again, thank you very much for this. :)
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LonelyVioletLacey Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
np prob :meow: 
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crapsound Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013
Oh wait, never mind that. Honest mistake. :D
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crapsound Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013
Goddammit, sorry for the multiple comments I thought this was a different poem about Slender. I'm really sorry. XD
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Ruben0031 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013
pewds plays slender-man like no man.he makes it funny...but i'm still scared for the slender man stalks you in ur sleeps
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LonelyVioletLacey Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe :meow:
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YugiDMega Featured By Owner May 10, 2013
Cool
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Poison1234 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
PewDiePie makes Slender less scary. :D

But still.... I'm scared guys...
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DolphinsandBowties Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
Don't worry, there is NO such thing as Slender Man.  As you probably already know, he originated on the Something Awful forums, as part of the Paranormal Photoshop contest.  See?  Nothing to worry about, he's solely a man-made figment of imagination.  :)
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Poison1234 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
True. But he's still pretty damn scary. :P
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DolphinsandBowties Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
Yeah :D  Try watching 11 Drunk Guys, it was IMPOSSIBLE for me to be on edge after watching them xD

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Poison1234 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Pfft.... XDD
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digorylarynith Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013   General Artist
I want to play the hospice despite of it's horror! :3
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LonelyVioletLacey Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You really should, it's fun once you get the hang of it :)
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6Phantom6 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013
Is it all worth it?

To traverse through a deserted building or forest to find pages that were scattered by persons in the past? To be stalked by an abomination with no face and a slender figure? To become one of many missing from society, possibly dead and forever lost?

Sorry, I just felt like saying that. Glad to be able to read the whole poem. Your sacrifice of your dignity and soiled garments shall not go unnoticed. We salute! :salute:
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LonelyVioletLacey Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol thank you :heart:
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6Phantom6 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
No prob :peace:

I really wanna play it, but I have a laptop, and it aint good for gaming.
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LonelyVioletLacey Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, we'll I'm sorry :3
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6Phantom6 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013
MEh, it's okay. That's what watching play-throughs are for. Plus, I don't really think Slenderman's all that scary. Just jump scares of a tall Eldritch abomination that looks like a mall statue who happens to have tentacles and uses the Schrodinger's Cat method of moving. Yeah, the concept of getting stalked by a creature of another dimension. But one factor stands out; why go after this dang thing?
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LonelyVioletLacey Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It is mostly jump scares, but it's better if your actually playing it. It's simular to a roller coaster. There's that big ride that looks scary, but not as scary and thrilling when your actually riding. If you actually play slender alone in a dark room, it can scare the crap out of you with it's creepy music and such :meow:
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6Phantom6 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013
I heard. Too many tales of people hitting the ceiling when in the dark with Slender.
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:iconlonelyvioletlacey:
LonelyVioletLacey Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD it's even creepier after hearing the creepypasta stories o.o
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diokoxkristof Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
omg he's real, or better "It's" real. D:
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killerSpazball Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
Hopsice
Epic Hos
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Yleyna Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like the poem and the game!
But you have a mistake in the headline! It's called "Der Gro▀mann" not with ÷. It means "The tall man" in English!
Thanks for uploading the poem!
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YugiDMega Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
You know what would help in a game that involves the only source of light to you but a beacon to Slender?

Night Vision Goggles
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LonelyVioletLacey Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
so true XD
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YugiDMega Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012
lol
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YugiDMega Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
And a Shot gun with unlimited ammo
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DolphinsandBowties Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
I think that in the earlier versions of the Sanatorium game, once you get all the pages, you get a gun and try to kill Mr. Slendy :)  But now they took that out, I believe.  :/
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